Wrong Way
By Zhie
Contact Email: zhiester@gmail.com
Beta: None
Rating: NC-17
Main Characters: Oropher, Galion, and
lots of OFCs
Written For: Bird
Original Request: dirty nasty sordid
love triangle with Galion and Oropher, where they play dirty to win the
fair maid's affections...some humor is not opposed, chuckles. MUST be
NC/17 OH!! and i want it to be first age...laughs...before they go to
Greenwood. OH !! and I want them to all do it at the same time
too...which should be interesting what with Oropher and Galion being at
odds over the chick...
Word Count: 3,208
Summary: Oropher vs. Galion, in the
world series of love. Or something like that.
Authors note: I did my best, Birdiebird,
I hope you enjoy it. I don't know if she qualifies as a 'fair
maiden' (or even a maiden...), and some humor ended up leading to
extreme silliness in cases. Oh well... poor you for pulling me in
all of this! LOL
PS -- Bird, I do NOT smell like poopy...
just FYI...
This tale is not what you would call
your typical fairy tale romance. In fact, there is very little romance
at all. However, the story is a good one and entertaining, so it may be
worth your time to stay and listen to my words.
There is a great deal of nakedness and
some thoroughly raunchy scenes that would make the professor shake his
finger or roll his eyes as well. There, see? I knew there was a reason
for you to stay!
It all started in Doriath, before it
became a wasteland with ample available property, and no population –
unless of course, you count the cave snakes and the spiders. Once,
Doriath was a pillar of prosperity. Among the residents there were two
young ellyn, ready to make their way in Arda.
One was a Doriath prince (though Doriath
princes in those days were a mithril coin a dozen), who was heavily
contemplating the possibility of leaving the caves and founding his own
kingdom elsewhere (for Elven-kinds in those days were slightly less
common than Elven-princes, yet a bit more respected and able to get away
with more). His name was Oropher, and he was blond (yet saw no humor in
jokes regarding his inability to tie his shoes), and cute, and all the
maids made goo-goo eyes at him on a daily basis. Oropher would simply
pretend not to notice as he preened and posed for her captive audience.
The other young ellyn was named Galion,
and his specialty was wine, which accounted for his tendency to be drunk
an awful lot. His favorites were white and red, with the occasional
bottle of unknown vintage and origin thrown in. Despite his love of
liquor, he had a passion for pretty little things as well, the prettier
the better. Most of these pretty little things looked longingly upon
Galion, whose dark hair and handsome face caused more than one to swoon
and sigh.
Galion served in Doriath as a footman
(despite the fact he had two feet and was not in any way related to the
second born of Eru’s children), with aspirations of his own. Unlike
Oropher, who wished nothing more than to be waited on hand and foot (and
other hand and other foot), Galion was one who delighted in the serving
of others, and hoped one day, should Thingol’s butler die, that he
(would pretend to be sad for a while and then) would slide into the
position.
Perhaps you have presently produced a
perfect solution for this peculiar predicament, however, it would not be
much of a story if they had simply run into one another and figured it
out on their own. Plus, there would be considerably less nudity, and we
cannot have that, now, can we?
Now, it just so happened that both
Oropher and Galion shared the same off day. No, I have no idea why a
prince would need a day off, but he had one, I am sure it was all
negotiated with the prince’s union, local 690, well before he became a
certified prince. On one of those off days, they both just chanced to be
walking down separate paths which would lead to the same place – Ye Olde
Swimming Pond for Chaste, Young Ellith.
Of course, neither would admit that they
knew they were heading in the direction of Ye Olde Swimming Pond for
Chaste, Young Ellith – they would both say they indeed thought they were
heading down the path to Ye Olde Dwarven Retirement Cottage to play Ye
Olde Bingo with the residents, as any respectful young ellin would do on
his day off. You and I both know better, and so, back to our tale.
Oropher reached the pond first, or
rather, a clump of bushes just to the East of said pond. He crouched
down behind him, not wanting to disturb the young, nubile, deliciously
delightful and appetizingly exposed group of ellith who were splashing
in the water, the morning rays glinting off of their wet, glistening
skin. They had with them a ball they had made of woven reeds, and they
were tossing it to one another, their firm breasts and long, wavy hair
bouncing slightly as they did so.
It happened just at that time that
Galion came forth from the other path, and ducked down to keep himself
concealed by the trunk of a tree. Oropher, at first taken aback by the
fact he was now spotted, decided to turn the tables. “What are you doing
here,” he hissed, pointing a finger accusingly at the footman.
“Me? I lost my way and here I am. Is
this not the path to Ye Olde Dwarven Retirement Cottage?”
“No, indeed, it is not!”
“Ah, then a wrong turn I made.” Galion
crossed his arms over his chest. “Just what is it that you are doing
here, m’lord?”
“I... I happened to be taking the scenic
path toward Ye Olde Dwarven Retirement Cottage.”
“Yes, I can see that,” said Galion, his
eyes darting over to take in the view of the ellith, who had decided
that now was a good time to held each other wash up. “Well, I suppose
you shall be on your way, then.”
“I shall,” snapped Oropher. “But what of
you?”
“Me? Oh, I seem to have a cramp in my
leg. Most painful. I shall need to stay here until it relieves itself.
Well, you had best go then, m’lord. No need to keep the dwarves
a-waiting.”
Oropher fought to come up with a reason
to stay, when suddenly he was doused with a bucket of cold water.
Looking up at where the attack came from, he coughed and sputtered as
another splash of water hit him from above.
Galion suffered the same fate moments
later, and was drenched far better as their assailant did not pour the
water straight down, but at an angle. Moments later, a young elleth
dressed in pants and tunic scaled down the tree, shaking her head.
“Honestly. What rubbish!”
“Beg your pardon, but was that
necessary?!” demanded Oropher.
The elleth, whose name was Alatamellon,
glanced first at Oropher’s subsiding erection, and then at Galion’s
raging one. “Yes.”
“We were just on our way to Ye Olde
Dwarven Retirement Cottage!” roared the prince. “Now just look at what
you have done!”
“You want me to believe you were about
to go play with Dwarves when there are a dozen young, gorgeous ladies
frolicking in a pond and rubbing each other with sweet oils?” she asked,
eyeing up both of them, for their clothing was now stuck to their
bodies, and even for a prince and a footman, they had very nice figures.
“Yes!” they shouted at the same time.
Alatamellon took a step back, mostly so
that she could get a view of them both at the same time. “Oh, I see. The
two of you are...” She raised a brow, thinking perhaps she was in the
wrong fic swap somehow.
“No!” they shouted again as she leered.
“Most certainly not,” added Oropher.
“Well, whatever the reason,” announced
Alatamellon, loud enough for the ellith in the pond to hear, “I think
the two of you make a fine looking couple. My congratulations at your
bravery, for really being true to yourselves and each other, and what
you are.” She gave them a wink, which only they saw, whilst the maidens
in the pond murmured and balked over the fact none of them had seen it
before, and wasn’t it a shame, and oh, well, at least they would not
feel exposed now if ever again one or the other were to walk by.
Galion’s mouth hung open in
bewilderment, until the meaning completely hit him, and he blushed in
anger and embarrassment. Oropher simply narrowed his eyes, and stomped
off in the way he had come.
“Better go get him, sweetheart,” said
Alatamellon, giving Galion a push in Oropher’s direction.
The young footman stumbled forward, and
not knowing what else to do, fled up the path that Oropher was
traveling.
“Go find your own way home,” said
Oropher as the footman approached. “This is going to be bad enough as it
is, we do not need to be seen together!”
“I intend to take the shortest route
back, thank you very much, and find myself an elleth to bond with if
necessary before these rumors spread into the city!”
Oropher nodded. “For once, you may have
an idea.”
Galion glared at him, but said nothing.
“What I would like to do,” Oropher
finally admitted after they sloshed by Ye Olde Dwarven Retirement
Cottage on their way back to the caves, “is get my hands on that
impudent little one who caught us. Who does she think she is, anyway?”
“Probably one of those Ellith Liberation
nuts. She was wearing leggings, you know.”
Oropher was silent for a while, and
finally said, “I think perhaps I will get my hands on that elleth. She
was... decent looking.”
“Decent looking?” Galion snorted.
“Decent looking, my eye. Did you see the size of her chest? You would
nearly need to use both hands to hold onto one of them!”
“Shut your mouth,” scolded Oropher.
“That could be my future wife you are talking about.”
“Your future wife? Hmmm...” Galion let
his mind wander. “Not if someone else marries her first.”
“What is that supposed to mean?”
demanded Oropher as they reached the city.
“Oh, nothing,” replied Galion, smirking
as he left to find a warm fire and a change of clothes.
For the next several weeks, Oropher and
Galion each began to court (read: stalk) Alatamellon, though, to no
avail. Oropher brought roses, by the dozens, sneaking them into her
rooms and strategically placing them everywhere he could. Petals would
be scattered over his pillows and sheets, and buds would decorate the
tabletops and shelves. Yet he would find them disposed of in the trash
heap only hours later.
Galion fared no better. His gifts of
baskets laden with rich pastries and sweets of every kind were placed
with care by her doorstep before she awoke. Each day, to his dismay, he
would watch them being carried to Ye Olde Swimming Pond for Chaste,
Young Ellith by the group who frequented it.
It turned out that Alatamellon was
something of a den mother to the young ellith she watched over. She took
it upon herself to oversee the dozen or so beauties who had been
orphaned by things like wolf attacks or the avada kedavra or something
of that sort. She would watch them, hidden in the trees, during the days
and evenings, which meant she was in her rooms very little of the time.
Both of her would-be suitors came to
know her schedule, and it was perhaps a happy coincidence that they both
ended up at her door at the same time one evening. “What do you want?”
demanded Oropher, holding a bouquet of red roses.
“I want what’s behind door number one,”
grinned Galion, a box of fine candies tucked under his arm. “Kindly step
aside.”
Before the pair could get into an
argument, the door opened, and Alatamellon peered out at them. “Just
what do the two of you think you are doing?”
Oropher stepped forward, blocking
Galion. “M’lady, I came to give you these. I saw them, and they reminded
me of your own pure beauty.”
“Dead flowers. How nice. Get them away
from me,” she demanded.
Blinking in shock, Oropher asked, “But
why? I thought all ladies liked to get flowers.”
Taking a step back, Alatamellon sneezed.
“I happen to be—choo! --allergic to flowers.”
Shoving Oropher aside, Galion gave
Alatamellon a winning smile. “Here, m’lady. Perhaps this will cheer you
up.” He held out the box of candy, and she frowned.
“Sure, great, thanks. A big box of
chocolate. Do you know how unhealthy this stuff is? What do you want me
to do, get fat?” She took the box and tossed it haphazardly aside onto a
table in her rooms as the smile on Galion’s face fell. “Look, I know why
the two of you keep doing these things, but please, stop.”
With a sigh, both Galion and Oropher
hung their heads and began to leave.
“Where are you going?” Alatamellon
demanded.
“You... you told us to go,” Oropher
said.
“I told you I knew why you were doing
what you have been doing, and to stop. I never said to leave.”
Alatamellon went back into her rooms, leaving the door wide open.
Oropher and Galion looked at one
another, and then scrambled into the room, slamming the door shut behind
them. “Galion, I think you might have the wrong idea. Obviously, she
wants me over you. I am, after all, a prince, where you... are not,”
explained Oropher.
“Oh, no. I want him to stay,” said
Alatamellon as she untied her leggings and slid them down her shapely
legs so that she could step out of them. Her tunic top hung down low
enough that it just covered her rear.
“Oh.” Galion ashamedly turned to leave.
“I want both of you to stay.”
Alatamellon was slipping out of her panties (because all ellith in
Doriath wore pretty panties, you know) as she said this, and flung them
at Oropher, giggling when they hit his shoulder and stayed perched there
until he plucked them off. “Who wants to have to choose, hmm? Besides, I
cannot have flowers, and I cannot have candy, I might as well get an
adequate amount of sexual favors.”
“Well, who can argue with that?” Galion
closed the space between himself and Alatamellon. His hands rested on
her hips only briefly before traveling down to grab her backside and
give it a good squeeze while he sealed his lips over hers.
Oropher was not about to be left out of
the equation, and after pulling his shirt off over his head, came around
behind Alatamellon. He bent his head down to kiss her shoulders and neck
while rubbing his growing erection against her rump. Grinding harder as
he heard her moans, he reached around and rubbed a finger in the damp
folds before Galion joined him in this task.
Alatamellon leaned back against Oropher
as one hand rubbed all of the sensitive places that were exposed, and
another began to dip into her core, preparing her for what was to come.
She felt those fingers slide out and slip back, teasing her other
opening.
Galion stepped away briefly to remove
his clothing in haste before resuming his position in front. His
hardened length twitched as it came in contact with her moist flesh, but
he fought to contain himself until Oropher was undressed as well.
Despite wanting her all to himself, Galion knew that sharing was better
than having none at all, and so accepted it – for now, at least. He
knelt down before Alatamellon, his powerful arms and hands wrapped
around her legs and supporting her so that she did not crumple to the
ground as he tormented her with his tongue between her thighs.
Not only did Oropher remove his
leggings, but he took off Alatamellon’s top as well, exposing the
wonderfully large breasts he had wished to see in the flesh. He came
around to the front to admire them.
Alatamellon was standing before Galion,
her legs shaking, her eyes closed, moaning in pleasure when an
unexpected rush hit her. She opened her eyes to find Oropher standing to
the side, his fingers readying to pinch her right nipple again. Wickedly
he did so, then held his fingers together longer, and turned his wrist
to twist the sensitive bud. This he did to the opposite side as well,
before using one hand to reach the left and his mouth on the right,
nipping now and again to cause Alatamellon to cry out in pleasure.
Galion looked up, not wanting to be left
out of this addition to their encounter. He stood up again, holding onto
Alatamellon’s hips as he slapped away Oropher’s hand and then bowed his
head down so that each of her breasts was being worshipped by one of the
ellin.
Building desire in Oropher’s loins led
him behind Alatamellon once again, where he resumed preparing her tight
puckered opening. As he positioned himself, he heard Galion tell him to
wait, and he did so grudgingly as the other ellon slicked his member
with Alatamellon’s own lubrication. “Ready?” asked Oropher, more to
Galion than Alatamellon, and the footman nodded.
Both of their erect members pierced
Alatamellon simultaneously, filling her completely. She braced herself,
legs spread, arms around Galion’s neck, as the pair thrust into her hard
and fast. Kisses were traded between her and Oropher while Galion
suckled her nipples and nipped at her throat. They came one after
another, in such quick succession that it hardly mattered the order, and
tossed a towel over the mess on the floor, vowing to clean it up in the
morning.
“That is not going to work,” whispered
Galion. “You must stay here now.”
“Why are you arguing? If she does not
want to go, I would think you would be happy to have her to yourself.”
The pair was arguing again, this time in
bed, with Alatamellon between them. Oropher had revealed his plans to
leave Doriath to Galion, who disagreed with the entire idea.
“If you go, and she does not go with you
– well, how fair is that to her?”
“I had planned on this long before I
ever knew her,” Oropher hissed back, not really wanting to leave
Alatamellon, but not planning to force her to leave with him against her
will.
Before the argument could come to blows,
Alatamellon said in a tired voice, having just been awoken, “Galion, if
you come along, you would be able to obtain a butler position
immediately. Head of the household, most likely. Oropher, you just hire
him now before even getting there, then he knows he has job security.”
“That sounds all fine and well,” replied
Oropher, “but what about you?”
“Me? Oh, well, as long as we get to do
what we did tonight at least once a week, I have no problem following
the two of you anywhere,” she said, snuggling herself down between them
again. “However, I will have to bring the chaste young ellith along,
that is, if neither of you mind.”
“Mind? What is there to mind?”
questioned Galion.
Oropher thought it over for a moment.
“Do they still think the two of us are... you know...?”
Alatamellon shrugged. “I certainly hope
so... that way, I shall have no worries that one of them might try to
steal one or both of you away from me...”
The End... Well, more or less.
Obviously, you must assume the pair left Doriath, founded Greenwood, had
and raised Thranduil (and perhaps other equally confused offspring) and
had a rather lovely time of it until the Last Alliance, after which
Alatamellon and Galion drank a lot (more than usual) until sailing to
the West to be reunited with Oropher, so that they could once again have
lots and lots of sex and live happily forever after. Merry Christmas!