The original was a stand alone story; I think this revamped version is much more branched from bunniverse, making it harder to be stand-alone. Other bunniverse stories are at Phoenix. This was initially written when TopKat put a rather intriguing plot bunny up for adoption, and I expected I’d have something a week and five pages later. It took nearly a year and thirty pages. A few paragraphs she offered for it were reworked into this story as part of Glorfindel’s journal and were the main inspiration for this piece. Inspiration was also provided in part by the lovely pictures by SayAye, Mei Tripp, conversations with her, and the music of Erasure. Now that it has been reworked, with many thanks to thinks both Marty (BC) and Britt have said, it connects to Unforgettable, and hopefully enhances what used to be what I assumed must be the worst story I wrote because it always acquired the lowest rating of any of my fics. Perhaps this will help bump it up a little. Enjoy!