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Penname: Erethren [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: August 27 2012
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Body Language by Zhie Rated: Adult Fiction starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Glorfindel wants two things: A mate, and to feel useful by being able to protect something. Who knew both wishes could be granted at the same time? Notes: Written for DarkDreamer's challenge on Erestor Lovers'“ Reborn Balrog Slayer seeks Single Male Elf for cuddling and naughtiness. Must be unable to dodge falling bookshelves. ((It should be noted that I am a librarian, and the falling bookshelf? It really did happen in my library.))
Categories: Stories of Arda > Deaf
Characters: Erestor, Glorfindel
Awards: None
Challenge: None
Genre: Dramatic, Romantic
Special Collection: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17724 Read Count: 106827
[Report This] Published: May 09 2010 Updated: May 09 2010
Reviewer: Erethren Signed
Date: August 27 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh god don't do that! This isn't a story! this is curel! This is one of the best BEGININGS of a fanfic I've ever read! But there is no middle and NO END!!! All you did was give your viewer an attachment to a character, gave a few questions, a BIG "OH! Now it makes sense!", and then leave it without without an outlay of what happened, or what will happen the Erestor. He went from the stupid elf, to the deaf, THE END???!!! Your KILLING us out here!!! I hope the rest of your stories aren't way... your a really good writer, but this is a sad waist of tallent and inspiration. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE at least write a sequel!!!

Author's Response: ...you\'re tenacious, you know that? XD I do believe you are the first person to hit both the Lord of the Rings archive and then this one using the \'post at ALL the places\' tactic to get my attention.\r\n\r\n...mind you it worked, though I posted the actual reply on the other site...\r\n\r\n-Zhie